I was a student at Awahono School in Greymouth and this is where I shared my learning.
Friday, 31 August 2018
Shapes
In class we have been working on shapes. We had to do a Screencastify about two dimensional shapes and we had to buddy up and talk about some shapes. Here is mine and Solly's Screencastify.π
The Plastic Mountain
In writing we have been working on The Plastic Mountain. We had to make sure that we were writing in present tense, extended our sentences and used senses to describe: sights, sounds, smells, feelings, sensations. Here is my writing.
Click this link and it will take you to a picture we wrote about.
The Plastic Mountain
THE PLASTIC MOUNTAIN!
Another day at work and I still don’t have enough moola to live a happy life. “Ow!” Crunch! I just tripped over on a mountain of plastic bottles. I sit down on some bottles and start cutting the labels off the vivid green plastic bottles with my pocket knife. As I cut the labels off and put the bottles in a wooden basket all I can hear is the cars and trucks thundering over the bridge and the people on the other side of the bridge staring at us.
I’m so angry because I have been sorting plastic bottles all my life and me and my family and i are still under this bridge sorting plastic! I walk over and pick up a dirty green bottle and throw it in a basket but then I notice that it landed in the wrong basket. I stomp over and all I can hear is the sound of of people laughing at us, I pick the bottle back up and squeeze the bottle until the bottle is flat like a pancake.
I walk over the bottles and all we can hear is the bottles going “CRUNCH CRUNCH CRUNCH!”I pick up a basket and there a variety of different fizzy drinks like 7up, Fanta and some more lying in the basket. I pull out my knife and just before I cut off a label “AHH!” my mum shouts as she sees a big brown rat with a long pink tail jump out of a chip packet. I sit down and sigh and all I’m thinking about is why do we need all this plastic?
Click this link and it will take you to a picture we wrote about.
The Plastic Mountain
THE PLASTIC MOUNTAIN!
Another day at work and I still don’t have enough moola to live a happy life. “Ow!” Crunch! I just tripped over on a mountain of plastic bottles. I sit down on some bottles and start cutting the labels off the vivid green plastic bottles with my pocket knife. As I cut the labels off and put the bottles in a wooden basket all I can hear is the cars and trucks thundering over the bridge and the people on the other side of the bridge staring at us.
I’m so angry because I have been sorting plastic bottles all my life and me and my family and i are still under this bridge sorting plastic! I walk over and pick up a dirty green bottle and throw it in a basket but then I notice that it landed in the wrong basket. I stomp over and all I can hear is the sound of of people laughing at us, I pick the bottle back up and squeeze the bottle until the bottle is flat like a pancake.
I walk over the bottles and all we can hear is the bottles going “CRUNCH CRUNCH CRUNCH!”I pick up a basket and there a variety of different fizzy drinks like 7up, Fanta and some more lying in the basket. I pull out my knife and just before I cut off a label “AHH!” my mum shouts as she sees a big brown rat with a long pink tail jump out of a chip packet. I sit down and sigh and all I’m thinking about is why do we need all this plastic?
Wednesday, 29 August 2018
Author Visit
On Tuesday 28 of August Jenny Sommervell came to visit our school. She told us about the writing process and how hard it can be to write a book. She also showed us some of her books and she read two to us. My favorite book was The Day that Dad Blew up the Cowshed.
Here are some photos of her visit.
Here are some photos of her visit.
Friday, 17 August 2018
Plastic toy shop writing
In class we have been writing about a picture of a plastic toy shop. We were learning how to describe. We also had to make sure that we used present tense,
used senses to describe sights, sounds, smells, feelings, sensations, used adjectives to describe the people and things, used interesting, precise nouns and verbs
used senses to describe sights, sounds, smells, feelings, sensations, used adjectives to describe the people and things, used interesting, precise nouns and verbs
and extended our sentences by adding detail.
here is my writing.
Here is mine:)ππ
The Plastic Toy Shop
I stroll into the plastic toy shop. The shelves are packed top to bottom with bright neon colours. There are toy cars stacked three high on a shelf that are all different vivid colours. I am so cramped because the store is flooded with plastic toys that soon will end up in the sea or in a landfill. As I browse through the toy guns and try to decide on one to buy there is an irritating sound of keys from the computer keyboard clicking. As I walk up to the counter I am starting to regret buying this plastic toy because it might end up in the sea and kill some animals.☹☹☹☹ my name is Jeff the man boy!!
Friday, 3 August 2018
Symmetry
Today in class we have been working on lines of symmetry. A line of symmetry is a line in the middle of something like a piece of paper that divides it in to two equal parts. We had to get a piece of paper and fold the paper in half then we had to draw some straight lines and make shapes and glue them onto some black paper. We had to have 4 shapes with three sides, 4 with more than 4 lines, and four with 4 lines. Here is mine:)πππ
Wednesday, 1 August 2018
Reading Profile
In class we have been working on reading profiles. We had to make sure that we have a book that someone has recommended to us and some other things. Here is my reading profile.
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