I'm Evelyn and I will be working with the Summer Learning Journey team for 2018-2019 to read and follow amazing blog posts like yours! I am so excited to read what pops into that wonderful brain of yours and hope you have fun on this journey!
Those are some interesting facts about New Zealand! I love the way you have made an image of the New Zealand flag as the background, it relates extremely well to the topic and is very eye-catching, well done Lachlan! Please remember to make sure you put the information into your own words next time. I have lived here my whole life and did not know about these facts so thank you for telling me more about our country. Your last fact is so surprising, that's a lot of butter and cheese! Do you like to put butter on your toast or cheese on your food? I enjoy cheese on my food and especially on my pizza! Your last fact is surprising to me, have you ever been to Australia before? I've been to Australia two times and both times I visited Sydney. It's a similar city to Auckland except the shopping malls and amusement parks over there are much, much bigger! Do you enjoy shopping or going on rides in the amusement park? I think it's really fun to walk around with friends and have a good time.
It's great to see you using images to illustrate your blog posts. Every time that we use an image on our blog, it's really important that we tell our readers where we found it, and give credit to the owner of the picture. To properly credit a picture you will need to include a link to the site where you found the image. We have created a guide that you might find helpful. You can check it out here: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1VKjkMGwBrk2YI6Vtmg91OAQljr_T3ZSV6YZtu6MWFNM/edit You will need to follow these instructions to earn full points for any Summer Learning Journey activity that has asked you to post an image.
I'm Kieran from Sacred Heart School Refton. I really enjoy your design as the background and I found the yellow writing really stand out and the thing you said about the cows and the butter and the cheese, I did not know that, Ka pai. I fell like that this work will fit under a year 7 or 8 category, if you keep this up, you have a bright future. This work you posted is just amazing, so I don't have anything that I see that needs to be fixed. :)
Hello Lachlan,
ReplyDeleteI'm Evelyn and I will be working with the Summer Learning Journey team for 2018-2019 to read and follow amazing blog posts like yours! I am so excited to read what pops into that wonderful brain of yours and hope you have fun on this journey!
Those are some interesting facts about New Zealand! I love the way you have made an image of the New Zealand flag as the background, it relates extremely well to the topic and is very eye-catching, well done Lachlan! Please remember to make sure you put the information into your own words next time. I have lived here my whole life and did not know about these facts so thank you for telling me more about our country. Your last fact is so surprising, that's a lot of butter and cheese! Do you like to put butter on your toast or cheese on your food? I enjoy cheese on my food and especially on my pizza! Your last fact is surprising to me, have you ever been to Australia before? I've been to Australia two times and both times I visited Sydney. It's a similar city to Auckland except the shopping malls and amusement parks over there are much, much bigger! Do you enjoy shopping or going on rides in the amusement park? I think it's really fun to walk around with friends and have a good time.
Happy blogging,
Evelyn :D
Kia ora Lachlan,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see you using images to illustrate your blog posts. Every time that we use an image on our blog, it's really important that we tell our readers where we found it, and give credit to the owner of the picture. To properly credit a picture you will need to include a link to the site where you found the image. We have created a guide that you might find helpful. You can check it out here:
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1VKjkMGwBrk2YI6Vtmg91OAQljr_T3ZSV6YZtu6MWFNM/edit
You will need to follow these instructions to earn full points for any Summer Learning Journey activity that has asked you to post an image.
Keep up the good work,
Evelyn :)
Kia ora Lachlan,
ReplyDeleteI'm Kieran from Sacred Heart School Refton.
I really enjoy your design as the background and I found the yellow writing really stand out and the thing you said about the cows and the butter and the cheese, I did not know that, Ka pai. I fell like that this work will fit under a year 7 or 8 category, if you keep this up, you have a bright future. This work you posted is just amazing, so I don't have anything that I see that needs to be fixed. :)